They were older than you might expect,
with many miles and much dust showing on grave faces. It wasn’t a merry crew,
more a crowd of sullen individualists. Even at rest, all wore their pistols, as
if their sense of the fragility of life demanded perpetual protection. It had
the feel of death row in a federal penitentiary, and lacking booze to liberate
their weighted spirits, they simply contemplated reality, mildly celebrated
life, and thought about the violence they’d seen and the violence they’d unleash.
It was the way of a certain kind of man, not the soldier, as Jack had seen and
been, but the professional adventurer who roams from war to war and country to
country, selling his skill for gold but really for the thrill of battle and the
satisfaction of the kill.
We finally get a true-blue Western from Mr. Hunter,
whose well-written ballistically accurate tales of lawmen have teased at the genre’s
edges for years. Well, like Robert Parker and his Virgil Cole novels, it was
well-worth the wait.
Jackson Swagger is offered as a frontier ancestor to
the protagonists in Hunter’s lawman universe, and he is a damned worthy addition—I
kept wanting to get Kurt Russell on the phone and say, “Snatch this up and
deliver this dialogue true.”
Case in point, the following.
“I’m Jack,” he said. “I follow you.”
“Pleased to meet you,” said either Billy
or Matt. “We hear you’re the best man on the spread with a rifle and can see
like an eagle.” “We feel well protected. You can also tell us stories of the
war and your life roaming the West. Rumors say you knew the great gunfighters
now passed.”
“Rumors are rumors because they ain’t
true. And I won’t be telling you a thing. Let me explain how it works. I’m
invisible. You don’t see me, you don’t talk to me, you don’t look to me to join
in your conversation. If I speak, you listen because I feel it’s important. But
don’t look at me or nod, and I promise to never say anything funny, so you’re
spared the need to laugh. I may be with you, I may be ahead of you, I may have
gone on the scout, climbing a hill for a better view, looking for sign. That’s
my only job and I have to do it at full pitch. It’s when you relax that the
ruckus will start, that I can guarantee. So I don’t relax, and if a ruckus
starts, being ready before is all that counts. You boys hear me good?”
Mr. Hunter, being a firearm aficionado also gets his
violence right. His gunfights have always been less about machismo and more the
dry-mouthed, bowel loosening fear that is reality. Mr. Hunter has no patience for
mock heroics [nor does this reader] and for that I am eternally obliged to be
spared one more scene of adolescent derring-do.
“Don’t these things always go wrong?” said
Billy through a raspy throat. “Yes, normally. But it’s better to have them go
off plan so that you got something to get back to than to have no plan and just
let them tumble along crazy. Then it goes way wrong and that’s when the wrong
people get killed.
Another snippet of the fun to be had in these pages.
He slid the revolver across the bar.
“Sir,” said the barkeep, “I’ve tended bar in all the bad Western towns for
thirty-odd years. I’ve seen more gunfights than any man alive. I’ve seen Wyatt
and Doc, I’ve seen Bat, I saw Wild Bill even, and John Hardin. But I’ve never
seen gun handling like that. Are you with Buffalo Bill’s big production?”
“I don’t hold with showing off. The
exhibition was to turn it around, so I didn’t have to kill nobody. It’ll scare
most of your weaker gun people clean out of their pants.”
“Who are you? As I said, I knew ’em all,
or heard of ’em, and I know I’d know of you.”
“Just an old man in a dry season, waiting
for rain.”
Where Parker’s Virgil Cole novels are laconic marvels composed
almost exclusively of dialogue, Hunter handles the dialogue like a pro and sets
scenes with equal aplomb.
Her name was Yolanda. She looked to be
about fourteen, and under certain circumstances she would have grown to be a
pretty, possibly even beautiful girl. These were not such circumstances. She
had the zest and bounce of a seventy-seven-year-old. Her face collapsed quickly
from artificial glee to a mask of despair. Her eyes held no light, her face no
spontaneity. She had been hard used, then put away wet. The makeup, crudely
applied, could not mask that pain. Worse, she seemed to favor her left side, so
Jack peeled back the shoulder of her dress on the right, to reveal a bruise in
brown and yellow with the shape of a billy club to it.
Or this marvelous distillation of a night in a saloon
and the “Old West” itself.
Folks came and went, the place filled with
smoke, the piano man played on. A fight broke out over cards, but no guns came
into play, just fists. It was over so fast—big guy pounding little guy—many
missed it, and the others laughed. Whores cruised, mostly connecting with
foolish young cowhands, off to get their cherry busted. It was another night in
the Old West, except nobody in the joint thought of it as old: it was new, it
was fascinating, it was the present. Whatever tales would be told, whatever lies
inflated like balloons, whatever form of narrative would offer chronicle of
this time and place, it mattered nothing to anyone there, and their
imaginations, in any event, were incapable of stretching so far. They had no
idea they were the urtext of a myth.
Our protagonist, Jackson Swagger is full of Bushido-like
wisdom.
“Do you think—?”
“You clamp it down now, Chandler,” said
Jack. “Leave it be where it now is. No chatter, no palaver, no debate exercise.
That time is past. You’ll only confuse matters and yourself as well. Doubts?
Every soldier has ’em. But you have chosen a course and that’s what will
happen.”
“If you’ re not—”
“Clamp it down as well, Charles. Things
will happen as they happen. Don’t think otherwise, you’ll just be stirring up
your mind.”
Even minor characters who will appear for but a page
are given terse lines that paint entire histories and present pictures.
Mrs. Hansen was in a foul mood because she
was always in a foul mood and tonight was a part of “always.” You would be too
if Indians had killed your husband when you were twenty-two, burned your ranch,
and kidnapped your children, thus forcing you into a career in the whore trade.
At least she had risen to the executive ranks of that profession, even if such
success did little for her mood.
If this reader were to concoct a “Best of Western
Novels” list, well, this one would be given serious consideration.
More, please, Mr. Hunter, and thank you for this one.
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